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SilentSage

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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #405 on: July 06, 2012, 12:09:09 PM »

"Maybe the kit was a fake, but the file obviously wasn't..."

Common's face reddened from embarrassment.

"Actually... he had a... diamond grit jigsaw... hidden in the lining... of his vest."

"Idiot. We take your side and then you go and sandbag us."

While the others started to look for Deuce, Common started to think on where Deuce would go.

'With Manehattan being his hometown, and him being an illegal gambler, he could be anywhere. He couldn't have gotten too far since we heard him yelling a little while back.'

((Really?  So, what, is there going to be a part two, or a case 2 then?  Because this feels like it's far from over.

Also, I was half expecting that dancing mare to end up being a witness to something at some point.))

((He's working on a second case.))
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #406 on: July 06, 2012, 12:11:46 PM »

"He's not crazy," L.G. said indignantly as she trotted to the police vehicle. Knowing that she was probably not Deuces' favorite pony in the world right now, she kept some distance behind Common as he peered inside.
Razorback took the ponies away from the door and started to open it. Ducking his head inside, he looks around a bit before coming out fuming and holding a pair of hoof-cuffs that have been sawed through.

"WHERE? HOW? WHEN?"

Gear groaned and facehoofed.

"Oh no... how could I forget..."
Paladin grimaced.  "Maybe the kit was a fake, but the file obviously wasn't..."

He quickly headed around to the other side of the wagon, looking around to see if there was any chance that Deuces was still in sight.
L.G. sighed. "Idiot," she muttered. "We take your side and then you go and sandbag us." She walked over to the carriage to help Paladin look for Deuces.

"When we find him, I'm going to shove that 'fake lock-picking kit' down his throat."
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #407 on: July 06, 2012, 12:32:03 PM »

"Maybe the kit was a fake, but the file obviously wasn't..."
"Actually... he had a... diamond grit jigsaw... hidden in the lining... of his vest."
"Idiot. We take your side and then you go and sandbag us."
"When we find him, I'm going to shove that 'fake lock-picking kit' down his throat."

Razorback's grip on the broken cuffs tightened...

If he didn't see Deuces immediately, he'd check the far door of the carriage and the gravel underneath, hoping to find Deuces' tracks or something.
She walked over to the carriage to help Paladin look for Deuces.

The two of them wouldn't find much of a trail in the gravel... but would find a small trail of blood leading to the club's front door. Rice Bowl suddenly dived from the club's double doors and skidded along the ground, covering his ears.

"THAT JUNK'S GONNA BE IN MY EARS FOR DAYS!"
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #408 on: July 06, 2012, 12:38:49 PM »

Rice Bowl suddenly dived from the club's double doors and skidded along the ground, covering his ears.

"THAT JUNK'S GONNA BE IN MY EARS FOR DAYS!"

"What."
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #409 on: July 06, 2012, 12:40:54 PM »

While he was thinking, Common looked down and spotted something odd. He leaned down and inspected it.

'That's a... blood trail. By the looks of it, it's pretty fresh. Maybe...'

"THAT JUNK'S GONNA BE IN MY EARS FOR DAYS!"

Common turned his head to see Rice Bowl run out of the club. He immediatly knew the reason why.

"You fix the DJ booth?"
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #410 on: July 06, 2012, 12:41:08 PM »

"Well..." Drip Drop began, noticing Deuces escaped. "Anypony up for a game of hide n' seek?" Drip asked, raising a brow to the others.

"THAT JUNK'S GONNA BE IN MY EARS FOR DAYS!"

Drip Drop turned around quick enough to still have control in her balance to see Rice. 'Must be his dislike for new music,' Drip Drop then realized that the DJ booth thing was broken, no?
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #411 on: July 06, 2012, 12:49:05 PM »

"You fix the DJ booth?"

Looking up, the guitarist saw the others staring at him. From around the corner came Bottom Line, Morningstar, Cygnet, and Forget-me-not.

"That thing was weird," he said as he picked himself up. "I did everything short of percussive maintenance, then Deuce comes in, tells me he's bringing everypony inside, and fixes it with the one thing I didn't do."
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #412 on: July 06, 2012, 12:51:32 PM »

"Well..." Drip Drop began, noticing Deuces escaped. "Anypony up for a game of hide n' seek?"
The two of them wouldn't find much of a trail in the gravel... but would find a small trail of blood leading to the club's front door. Rice Bowl suddenly dived from the club's double doors and skidded along the ground, covering his ears.

"THAT JUNK'S GONNA BE IN MY EARS FOR DAYS!"
"What."
"You fix the DJ booth?"
"That thing was weird," he said as he picked himself up. "I did everything short of percussive maintenance, then Deuce comes in, tells me he's bringing everypony inside, and fixes it with the one thing I didn't do."

Paladin thought fast.

"L.G., you and Drip check out what's on that tape.  Broken, you go scope out the back door.  If Deuces went inside, he's either gonna hide there... or go for the keys in his dad's office and sneak out the back.  I'm gonna go look for him.  Captain... I can't tell you what to do, but maybe I can respectfully suggest you and your men helping with the search.  Posting at least two ponies by all the doors would probably be a good idea."

With that, Paladin went, with only a little hesitation, back into the club.
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #413 on: July 06, 2012, 01:02:01 PM »

"L.G., you and Drip check out what's on that tape.

Drip Drop was a bit hesitated to act, but she got the tape back in her hooves. She turned over to Rice and mouthed the words 'sorry' before breaking a promise. "Alrighty then, L.G., wanna lead the way?" Drip Drop asked with a sly smile, it was meant for moral support for Drip Drop not to be the leader. That took more work if she were the leader.
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #414 on: July 06, 2012, 01:04:20 PM »

"That thing was weird, I did everything short of percussive maintenance, then Deuce comes in, tells me he's bringing everypony inside, and fixes it with the one thing I didn't do."
"L.G., you and Drip check out what's on that tape.  Broken, you go scope out the back door.  If Deuces went inside, he's either gonna hide there... or go for the keys in his dad's office and sneak out the back.  I'm gonna go look for him.  Captain... I can't tell you what to do, but maybe I can respectfully suggest you and your men helping with the search.  Posting at least two ponies by all the doors would probably be a good idea."
"Alrighty then, L.G., wanna lead the way?"



"Calm down, Paladin. If Deuce wanted to run, he wouldn't have gone into a building filled with police ponies, leave us a trail to follow, or send Rice Bowl out."

"He's waiting for us." he said as he walked through the club's doors.
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #415 on: July 06, 2012, 01:40:57 PM »

Paladin thought fast.

"L.G., you and Drip check out what's on that tape.  Broken, you go scope out the back door.  If Deuces went inside, he's either gonna hide there... or go for the keys in his dad's office and sneak out the back.  I'm gonna go look for him.  Captain... I can't tell you what to do, but maybe I can respectfully suggest you and your men helping with the search.  Posting at least two ponies by all the doors would probably be a good idea."

With that, Paladin went, with only a little hesitation, back into the club.
Drip Drop was a bit hesitated to act, but she got the tape back in her hooves. She turned over to Rice and mouthed the words 'sorry' before breaking a promise. "Alrighty then, L.G., wanna lead the way?" Drip Drop asked with a sly smile, it was meant for moral support for Drip Drop not to be the leader.

"Uh...okay, I gu-"



"Calm down, Paladin. If Deuce wanted to run, he wouldn't have gone into a building filled with police ponies, leave us a trail to follow, or send Rice Bowl out."

"He's waiting for us." he said as he walked through the club's doors.

"Why would he be waiting for us?" Gear thought aloud, deciding to follow Common.
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #416 on: July 06, 2012, 01:52:09 PM »

"Why would he be waiting for us?"

"He listened to us the entire time. He knows what's on the tape. If Deuce is going down, he'll give us one last surprise before he's taken away."
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« Reply #417 on: July 06, 2012, 02:04:36 PM »

"He listened to us the entire time. He knows what's on the tape. If Deuce is going down, he'll give us one last surprise before he's taken away."

"And if he isn't going down?"
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #418 on: July 06, 2012, 02:09:59 PM »

"And if he isn't going down?"

"Then Deuces would say 'You'll never take me alive, coppers!' " Drip Drop replied with a amused smile.

((This is what I'm expecting  :yay: ))
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Re: Turnabout Broken Heart
« Reply #419 on: July 06, 2012, 02:17:26 PM »

"Then Deuces would say 'You'll never take me alive, coppers!' " Drip Drop replied with a amused smile.

"Well, at least you're keeping a light tone through all of this."
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